AE1934lys的博客

喜欢人生,热爱人生,珍惜人生

日志

关于我

书乐

退休老年人,一生爱学习,一直学到老.

文章分类

LOFTER精选

八招诀窍，教你实力撩妹 >

【转载】七律·重阳《一》

2018-10-14 06:28:52| 分类：佳作欣赏 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

下载LOFTER 我的照片书 |

本文转载自莺游客《七律·重阳《一》》

七律?重阳——用宋人潘大临句“满城风雨近重阳”续成律诗五首之一

七律·重阳《一》

潘大临——北宋哲宗元佑年间人。善诗文，又工书，从苏轼、黄庭坚、张耒游，雅所推重。为人风度恬适，殊有尘外之韵。北宋诗僧惠洪在《冷斋夜话》中记载：湖北黄州人潘大临工诗，多佳句，然甚贫。东坡、山谷尤喜之。临川谢无逸致书问：“近新作诗否？”潘答书曰：“秋来景物，件件是佳句，恨为俗氛所蔽翳。昨日清卧，闻搅林风雨声，遂题壁曰：满城风雨近重阳……忽催租人至，遂败意。只此一句奉寄。”这就是文学史上著名的“一句诗”的来历。

——用宋人潘大临句“满城风雨近重阳”续成律诗一首

文\莺游客

满城风雨近重阳，落叶敲窗室渐凉。

树上鸦眠停噪扰，匣中剑敛匿锋芒。

修篁有韵埋幽径，丹桂余香倚矮墙。

邀友东篱难赏菊，半壶醇酒熨忧伤。

评论这张

转发至微博

阅读(7)| 评论(0)

推荐转载

历史上的今天

this.p={  m:2,
              b:2,
              loftPermalink:'',
              id:'fks_084069092084089071081086086065072087081075080080086070087094',
              blogTitle:'【转载】七律·重阳《一》',
              blogAbstract:'<p align=\"left\"   style=\"text-indent: 7.5pt;\"   \><font color=\"#ccffff\"   \><span style=\"font-size: 15pt; font-family: 宋体;\"   \>七律</span\><span lang=\"EN-US\"   style=\"font-size: 15pt; font-family: simHei;\"   \>?</span\><span style=\"font-size: 15pt; font-family: 宋体;\"   \>重阳</span\><span lang=\"EN-US\"   style=\"font-size: 15pt; font-family: simHei;\"   \>——</span\><span style=\"font-size: 15pt; font-family: 宋体;\"   \>用宋人潘大临句</span\><span lang=\"EN-US\"   style=\"font-size: 15pt; font-family: simHei;\"   \>“</span\><span style=\"font-size: 15pt; font-family: 宋体;\"   \>满城风雨近重阳</span\><span lang=\"EN-US\"   style=\"font-size: 15pt; font-family: simHei;\"   \>”</span\><span style=\"font-size: 15pt; font-family: 宋体;\"   \>续成律诗五首之一</span\><span lang=\"EN-US\"   style=\"font-size: 15pt; font-family: simHei;\"   \></span\></font\></p\>\n\n',
              blogTag:'',
              blogUrl:'blog/static/108460538201891462852356',
              isPublished:1,
              istop:false,
              type:2,
              modifyTime:1539470364843,
              publishTime:1539469732356,
              permalink:'blog/static/108460538201891462852356',
              commentCount:0,
              mainCommentCount:0,
              recommendCount:0,
              bsrk:-100,
              publisherId:0,
              recomBlogHome:false,
              currentRecomBlog:false,
              attachmentsFileIds:[],
              vote:{},
              groupInfo:{},
              friendstatus:'none',
              followstatus:'unFollow',
              pubSucc:'',
              visitorProvince:'',
              visitorCity:'',
              visitorNewUser:false,
              postAddInfo:{},
              mset:'000',
              mcon:'',
              srk:-100,
              remindgoodnightblog:false,
              isBlackVisitor:false,
              isShowYodaoAd:false,
              hostIntro:'退休老年人,一生爱学习,一直学到老.',
              hmcon:'1',
              selfRecomBlogCount:'0',
              lofter_single:'<iframe width="140" height="560" style="overflow:hidden;" src="http://www.lofter.com/mailEntry.do?blogad=1&blog" frameBorder="0"></iframe>'
            }

{list a as x}
    {if !!x}
    <div class="iblock nbw-fce nbw-f40">
      <a class="fc03 noul" target="_blank" hidefocus="true" href="http://blog.163.com/${x.visitorName}/">
      {if x.visitorName==visitor.userName}
      <img alt="${x.visitorNickname|escape}" onerror="this.src=location.f40" class="cwd bdwa bdc0" src="${fn1(x.visitorName)}&r=${visitor.imageUpdateTime}"/>
      {else}
      <img alt="${x.visitorNickname|escape}" onerror="this.src=location.f40" class="cwd bdwa bdc0" src="${fn1(x.visitorName)}"/>
      {/if}
      </a>
      <div class="cwd vname thide">
        {if x.moveFrom=='wap'}
          <a class="noul pnt" target="_blank" href="http://blog.163.com/services/wapblog.html?frompersonalbloghome"><span title="来自网易手机博客" class="iblock wapIcon"> </span></a>
        {elseif x.moveFrom=='iphone'}
          <a class="noul pnt" target="_blank"><span title="来自iPhone客户端" class="iblock iphoneIcon"> </span></a>
        {elseif x.moveFrom=='android'}
          <a class="noul pnt" target="_blank"><span title="来自Android客户端" class="iblock androidIcon"> </span></a>
        {elseif x.moveFrom=='mobile'}
          <a class="noul pnt" target="_blank" href="http://blog.163.com/services/emsblog.html?frompersonalbloghome"><span title="来自网易短信写博" class="iblock wapIcon"> </span></a>
        {/if}
        <a class="fc03 m2a"  target="_blank" hidefocus="true" href="http://blog.163.com/${x.visitorName}/">
          ${fn(x.visitorNickname,8)|escape}
        </a>
      </div>
    </div>
    {/if}
    {/list}

<#--最新日志，群博日志--> <#--推荐日志-->

<p class="fc06">推荐过这篇日志的人：</p>
    <div>
      {list a as x}
      {if !!x}
      <div class="iblock nbw-fce nbw-f40">
        <a class="fc03 noul" target="_blank" hidefocus="true" href="http://blog.163.com/${x.recommenderName}/">
        <img alt="${x.recommenderNickname|escape}" onerror="this.src=location.f40" class="cwd bdwa bdc0" src="${fn1(x.recommenderName)}"/>
        </a>
        <div class="cwd thide">
          <a class="fc03 m2a" target="_blank" hidefocus="true" href="http://blog.163.com/${x.recommenderName}/">
            ${fn(x.recommenderNickname,6)|escape}
          </a>
        </div>
      </div>
      {/if}
      {/list}
    </div>
    {if !!b&&b.length>0}
    <p  class="fc06">他们还推荐了：</p>
    <ul>
    {list b as y}
      {if !!y}
        <li class="rrb"><span class="iblock">·</span><a class="fc03 m2a" target="_blank" href="http://blog.163.com/${y.recommendBlogPermalink}/?from=blog/static/108460538201891462852356">${y.recommendBlogTitle|escape}</a></li>
      {/if}
    {/list}
    </ul>
    {/if}

<#--引用记录--> <#--博主推荐--> <#--随机阅读--> <#--首页推荐--> <#--历史上的今天--> <#--被推荐日志--> <#--上一篇，下一篇--> <#-- 热度 -->

{list a as x}
    {if !!x}
    <div class="hotItem iblock nbw-fce nbw-f40">
      <a class="fc03 noul" target="_blank" hidefocus="true" href="http://blog.163.com/${x.publisherUsername}/">
      {if x.publisherUsername==visitor.userName}
      <img alt="${x.publisherNickname|escape}" onerror="this.src=location.f40" class="cwd bdwa bdc0" src="${fn1(x.publisherUsername)}&r=${visitor.imageUpdateTime}"/>
      {else}
      <img alt="${x.publisherNickname|escape}" onerror="this.src=location.f40" class="cwd bdwa bdc0" src="${fn1(x.publisherUsername)}"/>
      {/if}
      </a>
      <div class="cwd vname thide">
        <a class="fc03 m2a"  target="_blank" hidefocus="true" href="http://blog.163.com/${x.publisherUsername}/">
          ${fn(x.publisherNickname,8)|escape}
        </a>
      </div>
      <a class="f-myLikeIcons hottype {if x.type==1} js-liketype{elseif x.type==2} js-reblogtype{elseif x.type==3} js-sharetype{else}{/if}" target="_blank" hidefocus="true" href="http://blog.163.com/${x.publisherUsername}/"> </a>
    </div>
    {/if}
    {/list}

<#-- 网易新闻广告 --> <#--右边模块结构--> <#--评论模块结构--> <#--引用模块结构--> <#--博主发起的投票-->

页脚

我的照片书 - 博客风格 - 手机博客 - 下载LOFTER APP - 订阅此博客

AE1934lys的博客

导航

日志

【转载】七律·重阳《一》

历史上的今天

最近读者

热度

评论

页脚